My PPT URL
http://www.students.ipfw.edu/~goodmro1/annieleibovitzppt.ppt
Saturday, April 21, 2007
Wednesday, April 18, 2007
Week 10 Homework
http://draftsanford.cjb.net/
I searched around to find a Presidential Candidate Website of someone that is not that well known that I do not know their political views before hand so I can write a good rhetorical analysis of the website.
So I decided to do Mark Sanford at the above website.
The main page of Mr. Sanford's web site is very plain and not very eye catching at all, the font they used is a small times roman on a white background it makes his site seem very cold and uninviting. As for the pictures he has on the site there is only one of himself and it is a standard head shot and he is smiling which is a good point.
To make this site more eye drawing to the voter I would have had a color background a more appealing font in a accent color that would pop out at you. I would have used a more family oriented pictures since states Conservative values on his main page. Instead of listing his views just in a paragraph form I think it would catch the viewers attention more if he had the site arranged with symbols to go with his stated ideals. Follow up on those ideas with examples of how they would work.
On his page list I think the click on symbol could be more political since he is running for office the short phrase leads are good they are to the point. Once you go to the selected page you are again hit with that cold font and paragraph style they need to be more colorful and again much more appealing to the audience he is trying to communicate to. I myself would lean more to the patriotic this is just my opinion of the Conservative audience he is conveying his message to.
I know it is good to put all your past accomplishments on the campaign trail when you are running for office, but don't make it a listing I think it would work better if he offered his platform and why he believes it would work and tie it into his past decisions. Make it so the average person understands his thoughts a beliefs and where they will eventually lead to in the future.
I searched around to find a Presidential Candidate Website of someone that is not that well known that I do not know their political views before hand so I can write a good rhetorical analysis of the website.
So I decided to do Mark Sanford at the above website.
The main page of Mr. Sanford's web site is very plain and not very eye catching at all, the font they used is a small times roman on a white background it makes his site seem very cold and uninviting. As for the pictures he has on the site there is only one of himself and it is a standard head shot and he is smiling which is a good point.
To make this site more eye drawing to the voter I would have had a color background a more appealing font in a accent color that would pop out at you. I would have used a more family oriented pictures since states Conservative values on his main page. Instead of listing his views just in a paragraph form I think it would catch the viewers attention more if he had the site arranged with symbols to go with his stated ideals. Follow up on those ideas with examples of how they would work.
On his page list I think the click on symbol could be more political since he is running for office the short phrase leads are good they are to the point. Once you go to the selected page you are again hit with that cold font and paragraph style they need to be more colorful and again much more appealing to the audience he is trying to communicate to. I myself would lean more to the patriotic this is just my opinion of the Conservative audience he is conveying his message to.
I know it is good to put all your past accomplishments on the campaign trail when you are running for office, but don't make it a listing I think it would work better if he offered his platform and why he believes it would work and tie it into his past decisions. Make it so the average person understands his thoughts a beliefs and where they will eventually lead to in the future.
Week 9
Idea for a Class Video Project.
a. Warsaw Wave Travel Soccer To show what kind of program it is and what it has to offer the kids and young adults that love the game of Soccer
b. Soccer players and spectators of the sport
c. The Goals of the Club
1.to develop quality soccer players through instruction in the fundamental skills of the game, strategy, competition and sportsmanship.
2.program is not a recreational program but is a competitive environment where commitment, practice, effort and sportsmanship are emphasized.
d. Show a little bit of each age group at practice and each level of skill according to that age group then show some parts of actual games and tournaments.
e. On the Soccer fields
f. Nothing that isn't already available at the fields at practice or at the games
g. The club teams of all age groups it should be no problem to convince them to be in the video because it will allow them to show there love for the sport.
h. Children of all ages and parents of children will be my audience. I want them to see what benefits can come of playing for the Warsaw Wave Soccer club. I want them to to see the values that the coaches and team mates can achieve by working together as a team. How hard work can move them to accomplish great things not only in the sport but how they can use it in everyday life. I also want to point out the physical aspects of the game how soccer players have great endurance and physical benefits of staying in shape not just for one season but to seasons both spring and fall. Keeping children active can help them stay away from today's pressures.
a. Warsaw Wave Travel Soccer To show what kind of program it is and what it has to offer the kids and young adults that love the game of Soccer
b. Soccer players and spectators of the sport
c. The Goals of the Club
1.to develop quality soccer players through instruction in the fundamental skills of the game, strategy, competition and sportsmanship.
2.program is not a recreational program but is a competitive environment where commitment, practice, effort and sportsmanship are emphasized.
d. Show a little bit of each age group at practice and each level of skill according to that age group then show some parts of actual games and tournaments.
e. On the Soccer fields
f. Nothing that isn't already available at the fields at practice or at the games
g. The club teams of all age groups it should be no problem to convince them to be in the video because it will allow them to show there love for the sport.
h. Children of all ages and parents of children will be my audience. I want them to see what benefits can come of playing for the Warsaw Wave Soccer club. I want them to to see the values that the coaches and team mates can achieve by working together as a team. How hard work can move them to accomplish great things not only in the sport but how they can use it in everyday life. I also want to point out the physical aspects of the game how soccer players have great endurance and physical benefits of staying in shape not just for one season but to seasons both spring and fall. Keeping children active can help them stay away from today's pressures.
Thursday, April 5, 2007
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